Sidney Williams tagged me in a fun meme, so I figured I’d play along. Well, at first I couldn’t, because I was supposed to go to page 77 of my work-in-progress, and the only thing I’ve been doing as of late are novella length, or shorter. But, my genius friend Kate Sterling said I could do what she was doing and go to page seven, and play that way. The rules are, go to page 77 (in my case 7) of your current work. Count down seven lines, and then post the next seven lines/sentences. As I’m a chronic long sentence writer, I chose to copy the sentences, not the lines.
This is part of a short story I’m writing for an anthology on sexuality in fantasy. I’ve had some thoughts, lately, on the recent sociopolitical push to drag women back to the old prehistoric caves by our hair. It has caused me… Angst. Okay, rage. And you know me, go dark or go home, so this little dystopian piece of bad news was born. This scene is where our heroine, Cherry, is confronted by an official of her church commune whose twisted desires for her cause him to act out in unholy ways:
“To keep me chaste,” she sputtered past the blood.
“As a reminder the Destroyer is everywhere, and that his demons cannot be overcome with manmade Chemical, or the National Church’s polygamist whoring, but by purity’s resistance alone.” If Cherry desired her back as bloody and raw as the Warder made his own every night, she would have added, But, the government keeps pumping me full of hormones and Chemical so I can lure these earthly servants to them, and you let them do it, so how can I be pure when everyone demands something unholy of my virginity? As she had no desire to be whipped, she remained silent.
The Warder had always been a devout boy, singularly driven to understand the world they had inherited, the life so unlike the antiquated photographs of men and women walking freely in the sunshine, holding hands and pressing together their lips and bodies. He had latched on to the church’s inane assertions that the mouth of hell had opened up and spewed forth the creatures that had one day appeared from underground and carried off the majority of the world’s chaste in less than a month’s time.
As I am very, very late to the game, all of my writing friends have been tagged, so I can’t play the “tag seven friends” part. But, if you’re a writer stopping by here and want to play, go ahead. Just let me know in the comments so I can read your 7-7-7.
April 9th, 2012 at 2:50 am
Ok – I think my last comment got eaten. I’ll just stick with “good stuff”.
April 9th, 2012 at 2:49 am
I understand completely. And feel your pain.
March 29th, 2012 at 1:03 pm
I did this one a few weeks ago and seeing as i am NOt going back to that file for another three years or so I’ll pass.
I like this bit though, it seems as if you are writing (in these two paragraphs about today’s political situation. How Santorum and others want us to be a theocracy but bomb Iran which is a theocracy already. Makes no damn sense to me.
March 29th, 2012 at 2:40 pm
Oh, the whole thing is a furious rant about today’s political situation. I think I had a seizure at some point. May not make for the best writing, but I do feel better.