Avery DeBow, Dark Fantasy Author and Roller Derby Addict
I’m taking a quick break from dropping off the face of the earth to share what I consider the summation of my torture in revising my book’s opening scene.
Enjoy my torment.
Good luck! I hope it’s going well!
LOL, that’s what I meant, Avery – it’s the reason why he snaps. After all his fretting and brain-wracking, the old bat comes up with the perfect solution in an instant. Loved it. :)How are you doing? Still hanging in there?
Kate — I like the moment just before that, his deciding moment, when she growls the solution to his opening line quandary, “The night was sultry.” Charles — Never you! That only happens on TV (and apparently to me).
Hum, I refuse to admit that I’ve had moments like this. It surely couldnt’ happen to me.
I loved that movie. Especially the defining moment when Billy Crystal says he’s “going to kill the bitch.”
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