I’m taking a quick break from dropping off the face of the earth to share what I consider the summation of my torture in revising my book’s opening scene.
Enjoy my torment.
November 7, 2007
Sharing my pain
About Avery
I’m taking a quick break from dropping off the face of the earth to share what I consider the summation of my torture in revising my book’s opening scene.
Enjoy my torment.
Hell and Wheels 
November 11th, 2007 at 1:21 pm
Good luck! I hope it’s going well!
November 10th, 2007 at 9:46 pm
LOL, that’s what I meant, Avery – it’s the reason why he snaps. After all his fretting and brain-wracking, the old bat comes up with the perfect solution in an instant. Loved it. :)How are you doing? Still hanging in there?
November 9th, 2007 at 3:20 pm
Kate — I like the moment just before that, his deciding moment, when she growls the solution to his opening line quandary, “The night was sultry.” Charles — Never you! That only happens on TV (and apparently to me).
November 8th, 2007 at 3:15 pm
Hum, I refuse to admit that I’ve had moments like this. It surely couldnt’ happen to me.
November 7th, 2007 at 7:34 pm
I loved that movie. Especially the defining moment when Billy Crystal says he’s “going to kill the bitch.”